12:24am: Well, I didn't get rid of
all the contractions, but quite a few of them and a few changes in sentence structure here and there and added one extra sentence and look:
Is that even fair? You're probably not supposed to go back at change stuff...oops. Of course now I'm back down to 7th place, well, considering I haven't written anything
new LOL!
Ah geeze, it's late again, and I'm tired to the bone, so I'm gonna turn in, do give me your advice though about the contractions, should I go with what is the natural flow so to speak of the 21st century (not that anyone's calling anyone else 'dude' or something), or should I do the historical accurate thang.
Hunger
 Comfort
 Hygiene

| Energy
 Fun
 Social

| Bladder
 Room
 Nano

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Reach for the laser with Antic's Sims-ulator! |
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Date: 2006-11-11 05:23 pm (UTC)